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go ahead

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Then I say cry, scream if you must little girl,
As you sit in THAT corner, to your chest your leg's curl,
Go ahead and scream to nothingness, I can wait,
I will spoon feed you kindness until you take the bait.
I want to whisk you away, but I have not the means,
Until then little girl, my tears fall for each of your screams.

I know not what to do to help you out of your mind's hell,
But I do know for a fact that I can't leave you in your shell.
You're too beautiful to hide away, but need to be shown,
Whether you realized it or not, I've cared more then you've known.
I cried silent tears as I reread your cries for help into the air,
Or thoughts of people like you stopped me from saying" farewell".

Now I've decided to make known, that you are not the little girl,
The one that sat in THAT corner, to their chest their legs would curl.
You are the strong beautiful woman, who can overcome reality,
the one that conquered her fears, despite their own lethality.
I believe in your strength, you can take on that world alone,
If only you could convince your mind to throw away all it has sown.

the lies you've built up, the lies that others have made for you,
They need to be shut down so that you could pull right on through,
We both know that life will never be easy, but it doesn't mean it has to be hard,
It will always try to find a way to break you, so please be on your guard.

I'll always be rooting for you from where I am,
Standing and separating you from all of them.
I'll be your buffer from all the hurt you feel,
With me or not, I'll make sure you get through this ordeal...
Read and think about what was said, for it was said for a reason.

This was a response poem.
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tokikomosoto's avatar
This made me feel good about being me n moving on..couple of errors tho.
'Then' shud b than in the second stanza.'women' shud b singular and in the last line of the third stanza it shud either be "all it has sewn" or even it's. But love its composition nevertheless :) great job.